Society Is Influenced More by Show Than by Substance — ICSE Essay

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ICSE English Composition
📘 Classes 9–10 🎭 Reflective + Personal Narrative 🎯 20-mark composition practice ⏱️ Up to 30 minutes
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What this composition helps you practise

This composition combines a general observation with a personal incident. The model first explains how appearance, publicity and celebrity appeal can influence people, then uses one disappointing event to show how high expectations created by advertising may exceed the actual experience.

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Composition Prompt

‘Society is influenced more by show than by substance’. Relate an incident from your experience, which brings out the truth of this statement.

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Composition at a Glance

🎭 When Appearance Creates False Expectations
20 marks
1Recommended length: approximately 300–350 words
2Writing style: reflective statement supported by a personal incident
3Recommended time: up to 30 minutes
4Focus: appearance, publicity, expectation, reality, disappointment and lesson
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Essay Outline

1 Introduction: In the materialistic society, there is just no place for plain speak or modesty.
2 Blatantly resorted to in the corporate world for influencing people; Few examples.
3 Personal experience at the hands of a renowned event management group of Delhi.
4 Event titled ‘Dance with the stars’.
5 Blitzing of advertisements, promoting the programme.
6 What happened on the day of the event.
7 The tantalising wait for the star.
8 The stars failed to make an appearance. What happened thereafter?
9 Conclusion: Their advertisement campaign had carried me away which was the basic reason for my disappointment.
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Model Essay

There is just no place for factual plain speaking in today’s highly materialistic society. It is not uncommon to find friends bragging about their royal or star connections to impress others. This is most blatantly practiced in the corporate world, especially in advertising products or services. Companies resort to gimmicks, for getting noticed. They make tall claims about their product or services that are not in conformity to what they offer.

Thus one finds star personalities from Bollywood or the sports world, endorsing cars and motor cycles. One even finds a bearded celebrity, eulogising a particular brand of shaving cream. Advertisers use such brand ambassadors to catch the attention of the consumer which have no relation to the product on offer. This is feasible for ‘Society is influenced more by show than by substance.’

I had first hand experience of the truth of this statement during the Navratri festival last year. ‘The Times’ a renowned event management group of Delhi organised an event titled, ‘Dance with the stars’. The programme was a Dandiya dance, in the lawns of a prestigious hotel of the city. Renowned stars like Aishwarya Rai, Urmila Matondkar, Raveena Tandon, Salman Khan, and my favourite hero Hritik Roshan, were to grace the occasion. The hype enabled them to sell the tickets priced at `1000 each, on the first day. I managed to get a ticket for the show after waiting in the queue for two hours.

On reaching the hotel I found a huge crowd waiting at the gate to catch a glimpse of the stars. Some young boys watched in envy as I made my way through the brightly lit entrance. The show, as with all such star-studded programmes, began an hour late. The local orchestra ‘Guys’, regaled the crowd with some of the best pop music. The glamorous dancers with dandia in their hands, danced well into the night, but there was no trace of the ‘Stars’. Sonia, the VJ of Channel V, heightened the anxiety by announcing that the stars were about to descend. This continued well past midnight, but there was just no trace of the promised stars. At about half past twelve Sonia introduced Johnny Lever and Namrata to the audience, regretting that others could not come because of pressing engagements.

It was a big letdown. The crowd grew restless and gave vent to their anger by booing and hooting the organisers. Normalcy returned with great difficulty as Johnny Lever with his characteristic jokes made light of the situation. The three-hour programme just lasted for an hour, after which the crowd just thinned out. I returned home feeling cheated to the core. I cursed myself for having spent a princely amount on an event, that was just no better than the jam sessions in school.

Indeed, my decision to participate in the event was influenced more by show than by substance. I was carried away with the advertisement ‘Dance with the stars’ rather than experience the joy and gaiety of the dandiya ras.

Practice tip: When a prompt gives a statement and asks for an incident that proves it, do not spend the whole composition debating the statement. Introduce the idea briefly, narrate one strong experience in detail, and let the result of that experience demonstrate why the statement is true.
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Understanding This Composition

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The central statement is explained before the incident

The opening discusses boasting, advertising and exaggerated claims. This gives the reader a clear meaning of “show” and “substance” before the personal example begins.

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Publicity creates expectation

The promised celebrity appearances, prestigious venue, ticket demand and long queue all increase the narrator’s expectations. This preparation is essential because the later disappointment depends on how strongly the event was promoted.

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The wait gradually exposes the gap between promise and reality

The programme begins late, performers continue, announcements keep suggesting that the stars will arrive, but the promised attraction does not appear. The disappointment develops gradually rather than arriving in a single sentence.

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Crowd reaction shows the scale of disappointment

Booing, hooting and restlessness show that the narrator is not alone in feeling misled. These reactions give the incident movement and help demonstrate how publicity had shaped the expectations of the entire audience.

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The conclusion returns directly to the statement

The narrator recognises that the advertisement and celebrity appeal—not the actual dandiya programme—had influenced the decision to attend. This closes the composition by proving the original statement through personal experience.

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Useful Vocabulary and Expressions

blatantly
In a very obvious and unapologetic manner.
resort to gimmicks
Use attention-catching tricks to attract interest.
tall claims
Exaggerated claims that may be difficult to justify.
hype
Intense publicity designed to create excitement and attention.
star-studded
Featuring or promising the presence of many famous people.
big letdown
A major disappointment after high expectations.
gave vent to their anger
Expressed their anger openly.
carried away
Influenced so strongly by excitement or appearance that judgement becomes less careful.
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Try It Yourself

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Practice Prompt

“Do not judge a book by its cover.” Relate an incident from your experience when appearance, publicity or first impressions led you to expect something very different from what you finally discovered.

Write approximately 300–350 words.

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Before You Submit

1Have you explained the meaning of the statement briefly?
2Have you selected one incident that clearly supports the statement?
3Have you shown how expectation was created before the disappointment?
4Have you described the moment when appearance and reality separated?
5Does your conclusion return clearly to the original statement?
6Have you checked grammar, spelling and punctuation?
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ICSE Composition Guidelines

For ICSE Examination Year 2027, the composition should be approximately 300–350 words. Question 1 carries 20 marks, and the specimen paper recommends spending no more than 30 minutes on it.

For a reflective prompt supported by personal experience, keep the central idea visible throughout but allow the incident to do most of the proving. Explain the statement briefly, narrate the experience clearly, and make the conclusion show exactly what the incident taught you.

Official ICSE 2027 English Syllabus

Official ICSE 2027 English Language Specimen and Draft Marking Scheme

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