Commercialisation of Festivals Has Eroded Their Real Significance — Argumentative Essay

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Last Updated on November 3, 2026 by sanjjeett

ICSE English Composition
📘 Classes 9–10 ⚖️ Argumentative Essay 🎯 20-mark composition practice ⏱️ Up to 30 minutes
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What this composition helps you practise

This argumentative composition shows how to take a clear position on a for-or-against statement and support it with connected reasons and examples. The model argues that commercialisation has weakened the religious, cultural and social meaning of festivals.

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Composition Prompt

‘The commercialisation of festivals has eroded their real significance.’ Express your views either for or against this statement.

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Composition at a Glance

⚖️ For-or-Against Argument
20 marks
1 Recommended length: approximately 300–350 words
2 Position taken: for the statement
3 Recommended time: up to 30 minutes
4 Focus: clear stance, reasons, examples and conclusion
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Essay Outline

1 Introduction: Pious occasions of festivals degenerated to merry making, because of commercialisation.
2 Corporates use such occasions to promote products before festivals like Deepawali and Christmas.
3 Religious rites and customs have undergone a sea change.
4 Commercialisation of festivals is playing havoc with our culture.
5 Effect of modernity and Information Technology has diluted the essence of festivals. We now send e-mails, or cards to friends and relatives rather than meet them.
6 Conclusion: Need for us to pray and introspect, while celebrating festivals, to enrich us spiritually and mentally.
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Model Essay

‘Man is by constitution a religious animal’ said the great scholar Edmund Burke. It is religion that makes him more loving, humane, and sociable. Festivals are associated with religion and are basically celebrated, to commemorate a special occasion. These are pious occasions, for religious ceremonies and merry making, However their significance have now degenerated to only merry making, because of commercialisation.

Companies marketing consumer products have usurped such pious occasions, to enrich themselves. They launch new products, like garments, fashion accessories, and even luxury items like cars, well before the onset of festivals like Deepawali and Christmas. Their advertisements and discount schemes are targeted to create an urge to splurge, thus propping up their sales. They induce people to buy costly presents for friends, relatives, and children which have made festivals very materialistic. Gone is the joy, love, and compassion one experiences on meeting friends and relatives during such festive occasions.

The religious rites and customs observed have also undergone a sea change. Thus, we now use decorative lights instead of the traditional diyas burnt with ghee during Deepawali. This was a symbolic welcome to Lord Rama on his return to Ayodhya after defeating the demon king Ravana. Similarly during Christmas the carol singing and the hymns have been replaced with Christmas ball, and other forms of merry making in prestigious hotels and clubs.

The commercialisation, is also playing havoc with our culture, which is evident during the Navratri festival. This festival stretches over a period of nine days during which devotees dance ‘dandia’ to please Goddess Durga. The dance has now degenerated to ‘Dandiya Ras’ with filmy songs, and is usually held in hotels and clubs, the essence of pleasing Goddess Durga, being completely forgotten.

An important factor in diluting the essence of festivals is our mistaken notion of modernity and the convenience offered by Information Technology. So great is the pressure of time that we do not have the energy, or the inclination to visit our near and dear ones, on a festival that comes once a year. Instead we send them e-mails and prefer to go shopping at Deepawali melas.

Indeed commercialisation of festivals has eroded their real significance. This is because festivals have been reduced to only celebrations and merry making. Corporates have succeeded by their ingenuity, to convert such pious occasions, to enrich themselves. There is however an urgent need for us to pray and introspect, during festivals, for this can only enrich us socially and spiritually.

Practice tip: In a “for or against” question, choose a definite position and build the essay around that position. You do not need to force an equal discussion of both sides; your reasons should consistently support the stance you have chosen.
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Understanding This Argument

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The position is clear from the introduction

The opening presents festivals as meaningful religious occasions and then argues that commercialisation has reduced their significance. The reader therefore knows the writer’s stance immediately.

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Consumerism becomes the first major reason

The essay explains how product launches, advertisements, discounts and expensive gifts can shift attention from celebration and relationships towards buying and spending. This gives the argument a concrete economic dimension.

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Examples make the cultural argument specific

Deepawali, Christmas and Navratri are used as examples to show how traditional practices can be replaced or overshadowed by more commercial forms of celebration. Specific examples make an argumentative paragraph stronger than vague claims.

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The argument expands from shopping to social habits

The essay also argues that convenience and modern communication can reduce personal visits and shared experiences during festivals. This broadens the discussion beyond advertisements and shopping.

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The conclusion reinforces the chosen stance

The final paragraph restates the central argument and ends by suggesting a return to prayer, reflection and social connection. It does not introduce an unrelated new idea at the end.

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Useful Vocabulary and Expressions

commemorate
To remember and honour an important event or occasion.
pious
Connected with sincere religious feeling or devotion.
commercialisation
The process of making an activity increasingly focused on business, sales or profit.
usurped
Taken over or occupied something in a way that displaces its original purpose or holder.
urge to splurge
A strong desire to spend money freely or extravagantly.
undergone a sea change
Changed greatly or fundamentally.
playing havoc with
Causing serious disruption, damage or disorder.
introspect
To examine one’s own thoughts, feelings and actions carefully.
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Try It Yourself

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Practice Prompt

“Modern celebrations have become more about spending money than spending meaningful time with others.” Express your views either for or against this statement.

Write approximately 300–350 words.

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Before You Submit

1 Is your position clear from the beginning?
2 Does each paragraph support that position with a distinct reason?
3 Have you used relevant examples instead of unsupported general claims?
4 Are your paragraphs connected logically?
5 Does the conclusion reinforce your argument without merely repeating the introduction?
6 Have you checked grammar, spelling and punctuation?
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ICSE Composition Guidelines

For ICSE Examination Year 2027, the composition should be approximately 300–350 words. Question 1 carries 20 marks, and the specimen paper recommends spending no more than 30 minutes on it.

For a for-or-against prompt, choose a clear position and support it consistently with relevant reasoning and examples.

Official ICSE 2027 English Syllabus

Official ICSE 2027 English Language Specimen and Draft Marking Scheme

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