Which Is More Important: a Healthy Body or a Healthy Mind? — Argumentative Essay

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Last Updated on November 3, 2026 by sanjjeett

ICSE English Composition
📘 Classes 9–10 ⚖️ Opinion / Argumentative Essay 🎯 20-mark composition practice ⏱️ Up to 30 minutes
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What this composition helps you practise

This opinion-based argumentative composition asks you to choose between two alternatives and justify your preference. The model selects a healthy mind and supports that choice through moral judgement, maturity, knowledge, influence and personality.

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Composition Prompt

Which in your opinion is more important – a healthy body or a healthy mind. Give relevant arguments to support your opinion.

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Composition at a Glance

⚖️ Compare and Choose
20 marks
1 Recommended length: approximately 300–350 words
2 Opinion chosen: a healthy mind is more important
3 Recommended time: up to 30 minutes
4 Focus: comparison, reasons, examples and final judgement
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Essay Outline

1 Introduction: A healthy mind is more important.
2 A healthy mind enables one to differentiate between good and bad.
3 It is more lasting and increases with age.
4 Increases by use and sharing, imbibes knowledge making one powerful.
5 Influences life of self and others, examples of Mahatma Gandhi and Helen Keller.
6 Influences one’s personality.
7 Conclusion: An essential prerequisite to lead a happy life.
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Model Essay

Man is the only creature in the entire universe blessed with both a body and a mind of its own. This makes him the crown of creation. A healthy body is necessary to live, but in the absence of a healthy mind, one is no longer a human being, but more akin to an animal. Thus in my opinion a healthy mind that makes one do good deed is more important than a healthy body.

A healthy mind makes one a good human being, enabling him to differentiate between good or bad, virtuous and evil. It is because of this that all religious scriptures try to mould the mind of the followers, so that they can lead a good and pious life. In its absence one cannot lead a happy life.

The body is subject to ageing, while the mind is not. A healthy person with the passage of time, grows old and infirm, while the mental faculty on the other hand increases. One becomes more mature and wise. People come to seek advice and guidance from him.

The mind, unlike the body, is also unaffected by fatigue and overwork. On the contrary the more one uses it, the more perfect it becomes. It enables one to imbibe knowledge, that can be used for the betterment of self and the society. The power of knowledge, if used judiciously, can make one advance in life. There are numerous examples of people with strong mental strength and frail constitution, managing the destiny of nations, holding sway over millions of other wise well-bodied people.

A person blessed with a healthy mind also influences the life of others. Their impact makes people change their life and career. Mahatma Gandhi, with a frail constitution, led the country to wage a war for independence. His unique approach of non-violence and truth shook the mighty British Empire. They were in mortal fear of this frail; semi-clad fakir as they called him. We also know of Helen Keller, though blind and deaf since birth, led a normal life. These souls achieved greatness by sheer dint of strong willpower, endowed by a healthy mind. They are the source of inspiration for thousands of otherwise able-bodied men and women. It is thus evident that a healthy mind can more than make up for a frail or even a physically challenged body.

The mental strength of a person has an all-pervading impact on his life. It moulds his personality by making him more humane, loving, compassionate, and caring. These qualities endear him to people in society. A healthy and strong body lacking a good mind is no better than a beast. This is so because people remember one by deeds and not looks.

Undoubtedly a healthy mind is more important, than a healthy body for it is an essential prerequisite for leading a normal happy life. John Ruskin rightly said, “Remember that the most beautiful things are the most useless, peacocks and lilies for instance.”

Practice tip: When a question asks which of two things is more important, acknowledge the value of both before choosing one. Then use separate reasons to explain why your preferred option has greater importance in the context of the question.
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Understanding This Argument

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The writer acknowledges both choices before deciding

The opening accepts that a healthy body is necessary, but then makes the central judgement that a healthy mind is more important. This gives the essay a clear opinion without pretending the alternative has no value.

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Each paragraph develops a different reason

The model discusses moral judgement, maturity, knowledge, influence and personality separately. This is more effective than repeating the phrase “the mind is more important” throughout the essay.

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Comparison keeps the essay tied to the question

The model frequently contrasts the mind with the body. In a compare-and-choose prompt, this direct comparison helps explain not only why one option is valuable, but why the writer considers it more important than the other.

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Examples are used to illustrate the chosen quality

The essay refers to Mahatma Gandhi and Helen Keller as examples of mental strength influencing life and achievement. In your own writing, use examples that directly support the reason being discussed.

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The conclusion gives a final judgement

The closing paragraph returns to the original comparison and clearly states which side the writer considers more important. A strong conclusion should answer the exact question rather than merely summarising earlier paragraphs.

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Useful Vocabulary and Expressions

akin to
Similar to or having qualities in common with something.
virtuous
Having high moral standards or behaving in a morally good way.
infirm
Physically weak, especially because of age or illness.
imbibe knowledge
To absorb or acquire knowledge and ideas.
judiciously
In a sensible and well-considered manner.
all-pervading
Present throughout or affecting every part of something.
endear
To cause someone to be liked or loved.
prerequisite
Something that is necessary before another thing can happen or be achieved.
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Try It Yourself

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Practice Prompt

Which is more important for success in life: physical strength or mental strength? Give relevant arguments and examples to support your opinion.

Write approximately 300–350 words.

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Before You Submit

1 Have you clearly stated which option you consider more important?
2 Have you acknowledged the value of the other option fairly?
3 Does each body paragraph give a distinct reason for your choice?
4 Are your examples directly connected to your reasoning?
5 Does your conclusion answer the comparison clearly?
6 Have you checked grammar, spelling and punctuation?
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ICSE Composition Guidelines

For ICSE Examination Year 2027, the composition should be approximately 300–350 words. Question 1 carries 20 marks, and the specimen paper recommends spending no more than 30 minutes on it.

For a question asking which of two alternatives is more important, choose one clearly and support your judgement with relevant arguments rather than merely describing both.

Official ICSE 2027 English Syllabus

Official ICSE 2027 English Language Specimen and Draft Marking Scheme

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